![]() ![]() Imagining Neverland is very difficult-in fact, that's one of the big reasons I dislike this book so much. While The Dark One gets a little better at describing places, that's all we get. There are barely any descriptions of people, places and things. ![]() Both books contain fragments, grammatical/spelling errors, repeating one-sentence paragraphs, stilted dialogue and plot holes. Instead, we're given something that should be available for free on Wattpad.honestly, more like Literotica. If the author had taken the time to storyboard and plot, if she took the time to edit and get beta readers and IDK, maybe do some research, this could have been a lot better. It's a cheap tactic to piss off your readers, so they feel obligated to buy the next book to know what happens. Ending every book on a cliffhanger, especially when said books are 200 pages long, is lazy writing. The Dark One is a continuation of The Never King, and it really should have been one longer book. ![]()
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